Talk:Sense Morality
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I wrote a modified version of the fictional vignette, it seemed rude to just erase the one in place so i'll post it here and see if people think it's worth editing the current one.
The young boy with mussed up, brown hair looked at the stranger. "You know where my sister is?" he asked.
"Yes," replied the stranger, smiling as he held his hand out to him. "Come with me, she is waiting for us."
The boy gazed down at his dirty fingernails, hesitating. The stranger appeared friendly enough, but he couldn't shake off the uneasiness he felt in his presence.
Still, finding his sister was important.
Looking up, he was about to acquiesce when he saw it in a flash: black, evil aura, vision of agony and death emanating from the stranger’s entire body.
Cold-sweat breaking out on his forehead, the boy slowly inched his fingers toward his shotgun. No, the stranger was definitely not here to help him.
Much more subtle. A definite improvement over the other. Neongrey 17:47, 17 September 2006 (CDT)
- Good improvement. --LibrarianBrent 17:57, 17 September 2006 (CDT)
- :D--Cixi 19:39, 17 September 2006 (CDT)
- They're both good. Should I replace the old one? --Peterbluer 20:40, 17 November 2007 (CST)
- :D--Cixi 19:39, 17 September 2006 (CDT)
